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Recent years have witnessed a mounting number of people like shopping online, towards with people's opinion various from person to person. It is very popular to shop online. There are not doubt that it has many advantages. For instance, we can save many time if we shop online. Besides, we get conveniences from online shopping, which provides a lot of goods for us to choose. However, it causes many problems that impact on our normal life. For example, the quality of goods aren't guaranteed when we shop online. If we buy something online as the present for our friends, they may receive some low quality goods, which makes us feel embarrassed in front of our friends. Every coin have two sides. From my point of view, I think shopping with our friends is a good thing. We can shop with them if we have free time. Moreover, if we are't leisure, shopping online is a good choice too.
