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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17576
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分61.5分
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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;词汇表达较灵活准确,学术词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

I agree with the opinion of the view.whenever we face a problem, wo should have a clear think about it.If we just take a sap judgments, we will face many problems. For example, when I was in college, I take a subject. First, we take many prepartion, but after a few days later. we receive a message that the subject has a little change ,in that time ,we do not know how to solve it. So, I take a suggestion that we take the ways that hold up. If the number of the supporter are more than the anti-supporter. At last ,we have the concludetion. So ,you can guess the result.After the thing, I know that Snap judgments should never be trusted.Any things has it's own nature, we should go with it.

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