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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33543
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
评语:

文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Money-saving In today’s world ,money is very important to us .However ,most of us don’t how to make money be usefully employed .We students may save money through various ways .As far as i am concerned,we should be careful with our money by more sensible ways not just seeking for cheap goods. Take me for an example ,i once experienced some days without enough money to live .That was difficult but i had to find ways to get through it,then i decided to save money .I began to make my spending within strict control.I once have been crazy about collecting coupons because i thought it may help me to save more money when buy goods .however ,I was wrong .I found that these coupons are not very useful ,you have to buy a certain amount of goods before you can use the coupons you had in your hands .That is just a way to promote the selling of the goods. In the same way ,buying clothes in sell is not good choice because of the quality without guarantee. Nevertheless,some other ways to save money are not bad .For instance ,group-buying. Saving money is a good habit ,i think ,but you can always use more sensible ways .First,we can make a money-saving plan.Second, stick on your plan step by step. Third ,we can get more money-saving experience from those who are good at saving money in the net .Last but not least,saving and spending should be in a good balance. In a word , the truth is ,saving money is not difficult at all. Use your minds ,and you can be the best consumer.

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