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Money-saving In today’s world ,money is very important to us .However ,most of us don’t how to make money be usefully employed .We students may save money through various ways .As far as i am concerned,we should be careful with our money by more sensible ways not just seeking for cheap goods. Take me for an example ,i once experienced some days without enough money to live .That was difficult but i had to find ways to get through it,then i decided to save money .I began to make my spending within strict control.I once have been crazy about collecting coupons because i thought it may help me to save more money when buy goods .however ,I was wrong .I found that these coupons are not very useful ,you have to buy a certain amount of goods before you can use the coupons you had in your hands .That is just a way to promote the selling of the goods. In the same way ,buying clothes in sell is not good choice because of the quality without guarantee. Nevertheless,some other ways to save money are not bad .For instance ,group-buying. Saving money is a good habit ,i think ,but you can always use more sensible ways .First,we can make a money-saving plan.Second, stick on your plan step by step. Third ,we can get more money-saving experience from those who are good at saving money in the net .Last but not least,saving and spending should be in a good balance. In a word , the truth is ,saving money is not difficult at all. Use your minds ,and you can be the best consumer.