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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
We frequently meet with successes and failures in our life.Some people give up themselves when failure happened to them,and some are full of energy when they succeed in something. In my opinion,we should face successes and failures correctly.It just said that modest makes us improve and over self-confidence makes us lower.When failed in the exam,I was very sad.But I never give up because I believe that I will make progress next time.When succeed in the exam,I keep a low way and study harder to improve myself. Success and failure are just a part of our life,we can never avoid them.However,we can try our best to change them into kind of experiences.
