题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
Nowadays, it has been noticed that many people are becoming more and more indifferent due to lack of trust. For example, the boss will cheat the consumer in store, the student maybe cheat in exam. Why people choose to cheat ? How could people trust each other ? Some people think that we are less communications, when we don't know each other, we will doulted that is true? does he cheat me ? While the others argue that it is people who lack confidence in themselves. If a man doublt himself, then he will doublt all the people around him. Maybe some people told him how to be better however he thought you are not satisfacte with him. That is why more and more people loose trust. So, how can we change the situation like this ? As far as i concerned, the most important thing is to communicate more often. Only in this way, can people know the real man around you. last but not least, be friendly to your partner , be confident to yourself. If everyone do this, i believe that the lose trust will be back.