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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
My views on Online Shopping Nowadays,everyone has a computer at their home.So it could be easy and convenient to do everything what you want to do.For instance,shopping online.Many people now shop online.It has become a trendency.It is a fashion style. Undoutedelly,shop online do good a lot.You can see,it is easy,you needn't to go out.And it's more cheaper than buying it out.But,we should know,everthing has two sides.If you shop online,you can't know the reality,you can't know the quality,the feelings when you stroke it and you could buy something wrong.All these doesn't make an insurance.So,it can be always dangerous,you can always but the things you don't need. To me,i think shop online sounds pretty good.But we should realize the other things.So i suggest that we should buy things in some stores.Also,you can shop online if you are not available.But the best way what i think is to go out and buy everthing you like,that is very good!
