Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用学术词汇;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
The picture illustrates an authentic phenomenon that the increasing number of vehicles has brought great burden on our environment because they emit too much fumes for the plant to clear the air.It also gives us a warning that it is indispensable for us to protect the environment and decrease the emission of poisonous gas. On the one hand,there is no doubt that the creation of vehicles brings us great convenience.On the other hand,without broad vision,it also pollutes seriously the surrounding,causing irreparable loss.As a consequence,we should take immediate actions to suppress the bad result. First of all,it is vital for us citizens to raise the awareness of using the public transportation to reduce the emission.Secondly,the related department should develop more clean energy to partly replace the gasoline.Last but not least,it is planting more trees that can dramatically improve the quality of air. Only with joint effort can we overcome this obstacle together!!