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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下。

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Nowadays,more and more people lose credit,but the trust still plays a important role in our daily lives. First of all,trust to your friends.As a saying goes,a friend in need is a friend indeed,you should maintain trust to someone who ever help you.Of course,trust is the key to a long friendships,thus,we should believe each other.then,trust your team.Believe everyone in your team,because every person has his irreplaceable position.also,only a team trust everybody,it will can stronger.Last but not least,trust to good man in the word.The cockles of the heart in the people,there are warm. Although some people are indifferent, most of people are caring. In conclusion,not only can on maintaining trust make people closer,it aslo create a more harmonious world.

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