希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是学术词汇的积累;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Dear David: I'm very happy to receive your letter. But it seems you have trouble in learning Chinese .But you don't worried.SO here are some advise for you. First , you should listen to Chinese music much .It can help your listening skill. When you are boring, you can watch Chinese movies .Then, in your spare time . you could talk with Chinese . It can also help you a lot. I really hope that you can learn Chinese well.So that we can talk better than before .I believe you! Yours ChenQuan