高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown I live in the countryside and it became morden in recent years.There used to be very beautiful.There used to be many green trees around my town.The air was fresh.I liked to walked around the town to find the leaves fell down from the tree and then collected them in a album.In summer,the fishes in the river chased each other and had a grear fun. I liked this peaceful natural scenery and I often took some photos of them.Although the houses there were simple and the streets were narrow,people were hard-working and lived a simple life.But now,everthing has changed.More and more buildings are built up to catch up with the steps of the morden times.A large number of cars are crowded in the streets,causing traffic jam and terrible accidents.The most serious problem now is that the development of the industri has a bad effort on environment.The trees and fishes are disappearing.It is important for us to protect the pollution and save our city.Let's start now.