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高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:15浏览次数:11037
要求:
假如你是一位足球爱好者,请你根据下列要点提示,以“My favorite sport”为题写一篇110词左右的短文。
1 踢足球是你的最大爱好;
2 一次偶然的机会让你爱上了踢球;在回家路上捡到一个足球,然后就和朋友们一起玩,从此深深地爱上了踢球;
3 经常和同学一起训练和比赛;
4 最喜欢的足球明星是英国的贝克汉姆;最大的愿望是成为一名职业足球运动员。
参考词汇: 偶然 by chance 职业运动员 a professional football player
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者能较多样的使用词汇表达,但要注意词汇拼写的检查;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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My favorite sport I like many kinds of sports and my favorite sport is playing football.I always play football with my classmates everyday after school.I often don't go home until I am extremely exhausded.I love football just by chance.On one day my way home,I picked up a football which somebody lost.And then I played with my fridens,which gave me a lot of fun.From that moment on,I deeply fell in love with this kind of sport----football. The second day I went to school,I joined the football club and played with classmates everyday.After a few months' training ,my teamates and I took part in the city football game and got the first name.On that day , we sang and danced to celebrate our success. This experience gave me much more confidence to become a professional football player in the future.I wanted be a man like the England football star Beiker Ham who is my favorite player.I always watch the matches he takes part in and learn a lot from him.I have told my parents that my dream is to be a professional football play and they compeltely support me and encourage me to do my best to achieve my dream.This made me more firm.I believe that I will realise my dream through my hard work.

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