能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;请注意分段。
Billion ponds is writen by Mark Twin,Who is one of the most famous athors in the world.This book told story about a fortuitous advanture of an America poor boy named Herry Yardance.Once there were two London rich men beging that they lent an uncashed billion bill to Herry to see what he would do with the bill in one month.The one-month date came,Herry not only didn't starve or be arrest but also became a rich man and at the same time he had got a pretty lady's love.Mark Twin used his sarcastic and housmous writing style told us a fantastic story.