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高一英语作文模拟题:家庭旅馆

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:11浏览次数:3638
要求:
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友George来信询问你家乡的家庭旅馆的情况, 打算今年暑假在这种旅馆住一段时间。请你给他回信介绍, 具体内容如下:  
价格:单人间每天30元;双人间每人每天20元;餐费每人每天20元。     
价格:和住户主人一家一起吃中餐,有菜单,可点菜, 也可以自己做饭。     
价格:海水浴、游泳、登山,不付工资的温室劳动(自愿) 说明补充:近距离了解中国,还可以感受到家庭气氛  
注意:
1. 短文必须包括表格中的所有内容, 可以适当增加细节,使其连贯;  
2. 开头已给出;
3 词数:100左右; 
4. 参考词汇: 家庭旅馆 household hotel。 
用户的作文(系统评分63.0分
评语:

作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中学术词汇不足;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Dear George: You asked me something about my hometown household hotels and you wanted to stay here this summer holiday,didn't you?Ok,let me tell you some imformation about the hotel so that you can choose a proper one. The single room is 30 Yuan every day and the double room is 20 Yuan for each person every day.The eating price is the same as the price of double room.You can also eat noon with host.There will be a meau for you to order the food ,besides,you can cook by yourself.Don't you think it's fun to cook by yourself in the hotel? Maybe I could come to visit you only just for your self-made meals. when you stay in the hotel,you can enjoy lying and swimming in the sea,with sun shining over your head and sunglasses on your eyes.If you like hiking,you can go to the nearest mountain for a short trip.There also has a volunteer activity that is no paid warming room work.There you can know China much more and you will fell the atomosphere of family. yours, Li Hua

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