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Dear George: You asked me something about my hometown household hotels and you wanted to stay here this summer holiday,didn't you?Ok,let me tell you some imformation about the hotel so that you can choose a proper one. The single room is 30 Yuan every day and the double room is 20 Yuan for each person every day.The eating price is the same as the price of double room.You can also eat noon with host.There will be a meau for you to order the food ,besides,you can cook by yourself.Don't you think it's fun to cook by yourself in the hotel? Maybe I could come to visit you only just for your self-made meals. when you stay in the hotel,you can enjoy lying and swimming in the sea,with sun shining over your head and sunglasses on your eyes.If you like hiking,you can go to the nearest mountain for a short trip.There also has a volunteer activity that is no paid warming room work.There you can know China much more and you will fell the atomosphere of family. yours, Li Hua