2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays,with the science and technology quickly grow,more and more new product arise such as computer.it is close connection between computer and people daily life.I think the advantage far outweigh the disadvantage. In the first place,computer can increase people connect with each other.we can meet our friend who live in the far place from our by video.we can also chatting with them by QQ and sent e-mail .It is facilitate our connection between our and our friend.Second,people can online shopping .oline product have variety ,and we needn't go to shop in the market .online shopping save our a lot of time.last not the least,computer can pass the boring time and decrease people life pressure.but computer also have the disadvantage to teenager,especially irrational teenager.they are easily addicted to the network. As far as i am concern,we should have rational attitude to the computer.we should make full use of the network and let network advantageous to our life. As far as i am concern,