2003年6月英语四级作文真题:描述你所见到的车祸情况

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

An eye witness account of a traffic accident I definitely watched a traffic accident in 23 May 2014.It's happened at Tianai Road opposite the Luxun Park.That accident caused 4 people hunt seriously and two car broken. My friends and I have an appointment to go shopping together at yesterday.When we stopped to buy some drink and had a rest in the chairs in front of the park,the accident happened.We saw a red car stopping to wait traffic lights,and then the other black car rushing quickly to the red car."Pum" ，straight after ,two cars bumped together.We were scared and screamed.Then, we saw two people who were filled with red blood climbed out of the red car.