2003年6月英语四级作文真题:描述你所见到的车祸情况

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An eye witness account of a traffic accident My friends and I have an appointment to go shopping together at yesterday.When we stopped to buy some drink and had a rest in the chairs in front of the park,the accident happened.We saw a red car stopping to wait traffic lights,and then the other black car rushing quickly to the red car."Pum" ，straight after ,two cars bumped together.We were scared and screamed.Then, we saw two people who were filled with red blood climbed out of the red car.