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Dear sir: I bought a phone from your company.I found out something wrong with the quality of the product that is manufactured by your company,so I hope that you can change another phone to take place of this.Maybe it was something wrong with the spare pat of the phone which is the broken phone.Now I need know how to get the place of that solving the problem of my phone's. Please contact with me, 13790061218 for Michael. Thanks Your loyal client
