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Recent years have witnessed a mounting number of people prefer to shop online rather than shop offline, towards which people's opinions vary from person to person. There is not doubt that it has many advantages, but it doesn't mean online shopping doesn't have the weaknesses. On the one hand, obviously, shopping online has many strengths. For instance, we can save much time if we shop online. Besides, it is very convenient for us to shop online shopping, which provides a lot of goods for us to choose. On the other hand, the problem of online shopping has great impact on our daily life. For example, the quality of goods aren't guaranteed when we shop online. If we buy something online as the present for our friends, they may receive some poor quality goods, which makes us feel embarrassed in front of our friends. Every coin has two sides. From my point of view, I think shopping with our friends is a good thing. We can shop with them if we have free time. Otherwise, if we don’t have leisure time, shopping online is a good choice either.
