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句式变化多样；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅；希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查。
nowadays,as we can know,more and mre comodities on excessive packaging, such as moon cake ,the packages of moon cakes are very beautiful and big but the moon cakes which are packaged in them are very small. why does the phenomenon appear? the resons which i think as fellow:firstly, people who think comodities are packeged beautiful, the quality are better ,secondly ,many people buy comodites to give others as a gift,the packaging of comodities represent their face and social status,thirdly,produccer want to earn more money by excessive packaging. in my perspective,this phenonmenon is bad for bussiness development. so it should be controled,there are some advice of mine:one is that government should make some policies to stop it,secondly ,bussiness should pay more attention to product more high quality products,not just excessive packaging.
