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从句数量稍显不足，注意增加从句和复杂句的使用；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Nowadays, more and more museums are free admission to public. A lot of people have been attracted to the museums. However, the policy of free admission to museums appeared unexpected things. With the rapid development and popularity of computers and smart phones, people can know many things through Internet, but many culture relics, arts and histories only exist museums. When free admission to museums, people can realized them are interested in things by museums. Nevertheless, the policy lead to many problems. For example, the beggar begging will end up in a museum, and crowds may be damage culture relics in the museum. In my opinion, the policy of free admission to museums is wonderfull. But along with increased of people visit the museum, museums should set up concered with measures, such as maintain the order.
