拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;如若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Nowadays, more and more museums are free admission to the public. A lot of people have been attracted to the museums. However, the policy of free admission to museums appeared to unexpected situation. With the rapid development and popularity of computers and smart phones, people can know many things through Internet, but many culture relics, arts and histories only exist in the museum. When free admission to museums, people can learn what they are interested in things through the museum. Nevertheless, the policy leads to many problems. For example, the beggar begging will end up in a museum, and crowds may be damage culture relics in the museum. In my opinion, the policy of free admission to museums is wonderful. But along with increased of people visit the museum, museums should set up concerned with measures, such as maintaining the order.