2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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when you go to shopping ,you may find there are a great deal of excessive packaging food ,water ,of course present. why the excessive packaing problem become more and more serious? The most important point is that an excessive packaing has a big market.people need the excusssive packaing to show theiels.Actually this is the bad baviours and have a serious effect on outchildeen