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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；注意文中个别的句子错误；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。
today,online shopping has became a fashion way for many people,for more and more poeple are less likely to go out than stay at home,especially at chinese. in my opion,online shopping brings lots of good aspection to our life,such as we can get all goods that we what without going out,and their are many shops on the internet,we can look through them while we are sit on our comfortable chair.the feeling is pretty good when we just need to stay in our home to recieve our things,it's so convenient for us. but like there are always two sides of a coin,there still are bad aspects to shopping at net,too.the most obvious shortcoming is that net is virture,so we don't know whether the good that will be mail to us will be looked like the pictures that we've saw at net,and after we get the goods,we can't exchange it if we don't be satisfacted. my advice about onlion shopping is that we can buy some cheap things at net,and when we need to buy expensive goods,it would be much better to buy them at road shops.
