2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will Strong will is the key to success.Those successful persons always have the high quality,which including the strong will.Like Steven hawking,he was an outstanding and he through his effort to make his life better.Only have the strong will can finish the great job.If you don't strong enough ,you will disappoint to the society and do the bad effect by ourselves. The same for the students, they must study hard,or they won't be a useful person.