词汇表达丰富度要注意,不过单词拼写错误较多;可适当增加复杂句的使用量;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
Dear Mr.wang: I am writting this letter for making a apolog to you.And i wand to tell you about my decision. I will give up my job and decide to quit. I am very grateful for you can recive my application and give me this job.But i seens to give up this position.there are many reasons exists can explain my decision.first AS an edior for Deigns