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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
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有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累。

用户练习作文:

With the development of the internet which plays a more and more crucial role in our life,the internet have a strong impact on our life job and every part of our life.but every corn has two side. On the one hand,the internet connect the whole world which make us communicate with one another anytime anywhere we want,it do sure shorten the distance between each other,with the help of the internet we can chat online face to face just like they are standing right in front of you which we deepen our friendship all the time .otherwise,friendship will get drift apart because of the distance and the time .the internet make us more and more closer. On the other hand ,the internet is fill with all kind of temptations .such as computer game,movies and doing something on the internet which doesn't make any sense which has a serious impact on our friendship,because we spend some much time on the game or something like that which make the internet keep people at a distance . So,the internet is a two sides sword which may create a good choice for you make more friends or take your friends away from you,the depends on how you use it ,if we take advantage of it properly way ,it will benefit us for eternity .

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