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With the development of the internet which plays a more and more crucial role in our life,the internet have a strong impact on our life job and every part of our life.but every corn has two side. On the one hand,the internet connect the whole world which make us communicate with one another anytime anywhere we want,it do sure shorten the distance between each other,with the help of the internet we can chat online face to face just like they are standing right in front of you which we deepen our friendship all the time .otherwise,friendship will get drift apart because of the distance and the time .the internet make us more and more closer. On the other hand ,the internet is fill with all kind of temptations .such as computer game,movies and doing something on the internet which doesn't make any sense which has a serious impact on our friendship,because we spend some much time on the game or something like that which make the internet keep people at a distance . So,the internet is a two sides sword which may create a good choice for you make more friends or take your friends away from you,the depends on how you use it ,if we take advantage of it properly way ,it will benefit us for eternity .
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