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Human beings can only live depending on the nature. With nature, human beings creat a variery of inventions and improve their living standard. However, people should respect the nature. Any over-using nature can not only do harm to the it, but also to our human race. We benefit a lot from nature with which we achieve techonological advancement including jet palnes, cars, computers, telephones. Lond distance becomes easier which brings us more international communication and broads our horizons. through hard work, people can find the law of the nature according to which we can solve many peoblems by ourselves other than handing our destiny to it. For exmaple, the boosted productivity by automation in industry and agriculture has solved many famine problems in many regions. Finding the law of the body, we can cure many fatal deseases such as heart desease and breast cancer. Though, we still can not live ignoring the law of the nature. If we over use the nature, many fatal disasters will come out and hurt us. The earth becomes less livable with the decreasing amount of clean water, air and arable land. There are more animals are in danger of instinction. Disasters such as flood happen more frequetly. In conclusion, i think that human beings are able to find the law of nature. If we respect and accept the law, we can bring better life to ourselves and have positive eeffects on the nature. However, if we ignore the law and do whatever we want, we will not only destroy the nature, but actually destroy ourselves..
