衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;部分句子偏简单,注意有错误的句子;词汇表达丰富度要注意,不过单词拼写错误较多。
Dear Mr.wang: I am writting this letter for making a apolog to you.I wand to tell you that I will give up my job and I decide to quit the magazine. I am very grateful for you can recive my application and give me this job.But i seens to give up this position.there are many reasons exists can explain my decision.first AS an edior for Deigns