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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear sir or madam, I am Hubin,i knew your company's new product 5670 between Dec.12-22 in Newyork Exhibition,and i have a very interesting in this new product,Please send me a price list and instruction.thanks for your coopration,and i hope we can establish business relationship between your company and mine company. sincerely Hubin 2014-5-23
