2012年7月12日雅思大作文真题:出去上大学是否比跟父母住在一起好

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

With the development of education system,people pay more attention to education and more and more students prefer living away from home when they at university.Some people disapprove the students' opinions and insist that it's better for students to live with parents because of the better care.The argument seems self-evident,but in fact require closer examination. It is undeniable that students shall enjoy a relax and comfortable environment when they live with their parents.Besides,parents shall make a education plan which accords to their children's character for their children.What's more,parents are able to provide one-on-one tutoring for their children and most of them have more patience.This belief,though logical,overlooks two key points which are,of course,learning efficiency and students' independence. We can hardly lose the sight of the fact that excellent teachers and teaching facilities can stimulate students' interest in study and improve the learning enthusiasm, consciousness, improve the learning efficiency and quality.When they at university,not only can they read a large number of books in the library but also they are able to get highly professional trainings. Admittedly,students can more easily become independent when they live away from home.Without the help of their parents,they can deal with questions by themselves or seek for help from other students.And it promotes the friendship between the roommates which maybe cherish in their lives. From the above discussion,it is clear that it's better for students to live away from home when they at university than to live with parents.After all,we hope the students become more independent and stronger.