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2012年7月12日雅思大作文真题:出去上大学是否比跟父母住在一起好

发布时间:2013-08-02 17:07浏览次数:1122
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【题目要求

It's better for students to live away from home when they at university than to live with parents,agree or disagree ?

【题目讲解

学校学习的好处,是不是就是老师的功能?上过课的翻翻笔记吧亲爱的们~传道授业解惑,老师的优势专业训练,互动教学过程。然而家长教育,1.家庭环境更轻松,家长可能更耐心,2.家长可以言传身教对不对~但是!有缺陷吗?1.家长可能教育比较随性,没有方法,小孩子接受起来不一定好,效率不高。2.而且家长的知识有限对不?3.家里的设备也有限。不像学校多媒体呀,同学互相帮助呀,图书馆呀等等。

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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。

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With the development of the education system,people pay more attention to education and more and more students prefer living away from home when they are at university.Some people object the opinion and insist that it's better for students to live with parents because of the better care.The argument seems self-evident,but in fact require closer examination. It is undeniable that students enjoy an easy and comfortable environment when they live with their parents.Besides,parents make a plan about education which accords to their children's character for their children.What's more,parents are able to provide one-on-one tutoring for their children and most of them have more patience.This belief,though logical,overlooks two key points which are,of course,learning efficiency and students' independence. We can hardly lose the sight of the fact that excellent teachers and teaching facilities can stimulate students' interest in study and improve the enthusiasm and consciousness of learning,improve the learning efficiency and quality.When they are at university,not only can they read a large number of books in the library but also they are able to get professional training. Admittedly,students become independent when they live away from home.Without the help of their parents,they can deal with questions by themselves or seek for help from other students.And it promotes the friendship between the roommates which maybe cherish in their lives. From the above discussion,it is clear that it's better for students to live away from home than to live with parents.After all,we hope the students become more independent and stronger.

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