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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分87.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加从句的使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

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computer and man With the development of science and technology, computers play a more and more important role in our daily life.Many people say they can't live if without computers. So, what's the relationship between computer and man? As we all know, our lives have become more convenient since computers appeared in our society. Now, we can buy anything we need online, we can send e-mails but write letters, we can see all kinds of movies but not go to the theater. Besides, we can learn everything from internet, and even we don't need to go to work, because we can finish our work at home on computers. We can't deny that computer make our lives easier, but it also bring many bad effects. Many teenagers are addicted in playing computer games,causing they don't want to go to school. When we shop online, we don't know the quality of the goods, so we usually bought something we don't satisfy. What's more, because now we always chat online, we gradually forget to visit our relatives and friends, so the relationships among us are getting further. In conclusion, the invention of the computer create a lot of wonders in science, and it really bring us many advantages, but we still have to know that it can't replace everything, we have to keep our mind clearly. We are supposed to learn to control it, instead of being control by it.

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