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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
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拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,computers are playing gigantic roles in people‘s life,no matter our work and entertainment.To a large extent, we can benefit a lot from computers.While,every coin has two sides.So what we should do is to consider computers correctly. On the one hand,primarily,there is no denying that we can do many things on a computer.Listening a song and watching a movie are included but not limited.Furthermore,what extraordinarily summit is that we can ponder information ,which is good for our study,work,mental and physical health.However,on the other hand,computers may do harm to people,who are addicted to Internet games,or some other things.It is obvious that over playing a computer must waste a heel of time. In short,we should realize that everything has both advantages and drawbacks, and we ought to try best to avoid these shortcomings instead of merits.

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