题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较丰富地使用学术词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Computer and Man In recent years,with the developement of our economy and technology,computer has become more and more important in our daily life. people can do almost everything on the internet,however,the internet is a double-edged sword. as we all know,the internet has brought us a lot of benefits.for example,0n the internet we can watch tv programs,listen to the music,study ,and go shopping,etc.but,on the other hand, there will be also bad influence of it.internet rumors caused many social problems,in addition,the internet provides convenience to some criminal who engage in illegal trade.last but not least,there are many unhealthy informations which do harms to teenagers' mental and physical health. in my opinion,we should give right attitude to use computer,never believe internet rumors and any other unreal informations,what's more, relevant departments should make some effictive laws and regulations to control it.