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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17425
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
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作者词汇基础扎实;句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。

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Computer and Man In recent years,with the development of our economy and technology,computer has become more and more important in our daily life. People can do almost everything on the internet,however,the internet is a double-edged sword. As we all know,the internet has brought us a lot of benefits.For example,on the internet we can watch TV programs,listen to the music,study,and go shopping,etc.But,on the other hand, there will be also bad influence of it.Internet rumors caused many social problems,in addition,the internet provides convenience to some criminals who engage in illegal trade.Last but not least,there are much unhealthy information which does harm to teenagers' mental and physical health. In my opinion,we should give a right attitude to use the computer,and never believe internet rumors and any other unreal information.What's more, relevant departments should make some effective laws and regulations to control it.

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