2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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In this day and age ,online shopping has gained wide popularity among youngersters . Online shopping may by no means bring great benifit to people , it can save much time and instead walking store by store , also , it's very convinient , only in three days you can recevie what you want . you can find really bargin from the internet . In constrast , online shopping is truly dangerous , because you always don't know if the thing you want is truly discribed like the picture . Moreover , pay for the money on the internet is not safe , you never kown someday you can be foolished . Also , if you always so lazy , you will get fat . If I were forced to agree with one of the two opinions . I , doubtly ,stand by the second idea , because I really like to try a clouth in a store , I like walking store one by one , And I guess that online shopping can never replace the truly store .