2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

Computer and Man As the development of our society,the high-teach is more and more convient for our life. The invented of computer is an example. The relationship betwwen computer and us is complexed.In other words,the use of computer has adventages and disadventages.For the one hand,the invention of computer enrich our life ,work and study.First,the computer is used to do many things what we do not want to do.second,we can relief our emotion by suffering the internet or playing games.Last,if you are a student,you can learn more knowledge where you are interested in.However,for the other hand,others maybe say computer expand the distense between others.More and more people start to indulge tnemselives into untruth word,they spend less and less time with parents and friends. In my opinion,i believe the computer is a good tool for us.We should learn to use it,not be used by it.When we know about this,our life will be better.