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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

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When people meet a person,who is popular with his or her colleagues and relatives,they may confuse about the good skills.So, I think there is a necessity for us to find the reason if we nourish the dreaming of excellent relationships.While,we can find easily that the important of all is to maintain trust. No matter women and men,people all want to be trusted by others.Various reasons can account for it. Primarily,a person can get some information about preference when he or she thinks that a friend trust in him or her.Furthermore,people with confidence can make us think that they are cozy,so that we talk with them heart to heart.Last but no least,maintaining trust has a gigantic influence on fluent and agreeable communication. From the above reasons,trust plays a magnitude part in our life,so,we should learn to maintain trust on other,which is significant.

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