2001年1月英语四级作文真题:如何面试成功

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

I read with interest your advertisement which appeared in the newspaper and would like to take up the challenge as a sales manager with your company. I think this position is challenging .In the same time,it's a good opportunity for me to build my own career and to exercise and improve myself. My major and working experience make me qualified for this position.I am good at my profession in college and have gain enough knowledge skills.Besides,I used to some jobs which was related to sales and my working ability has been reasserted. At last,I have rich sense of responsibility and I can communicate with different people easily. I have enough patience during working,too. I would welcome an interview any time at your convenience. Looking forward to your reply.