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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
I have read your advertisement which appeared in the newspaper and would like to take up the challenge as a sales manager with your company. I think this position is challenging.At the same time,it's a good opportunity for me to build my own career and to exercise and improve myself. My major and working experience make me qualified for this position.I am good at my profession in college and have gain enough knowledge skills.Besides,I used to do some jobs which was related to sales and my working ability has been reasserted. At last,I have rich sense of responsibility and I can communicate with different people easily. I have enough patience during working,too. I would welcome an interview any time at your convenience. Looking forward to your reply.
