拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I have read your advertisement which appeared in the newspaper and would like to take up the challenge as a sales manager with your company. I suppose this position is challenging.Meanwhile, it's a good opportunity for me to build my own career and to exercise and improve myself. My major and working experience make me qualified for this position.I am good at my major in college and have gained enough professional knowledge and skills.Besides,I used to do some jobs which was related to sales and my working ability has been recognized. At last,I am responsible and I can communicate with different people easily. I have enough patience during working,too. I would welcome an interview any time at your convenience. Looking forward to your reply.