衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;部分句子偏简单,注意有错误的句子;请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性,但文中有较多拼写错误。
Dear Mr.wang: I am writing this letter for making an apology to you.I wand to tell you that I will give up my job and I decide to quit the magazine. I am very grateful for you can recive my application and give me this job.But I will give up this position.there are many reasons exists that I decide to give up my job.first AS an edior for Deigns