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2001年1月英语四级作文真题:如何面试成功

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:40浏览次数:1165
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 面试在求职过程中的作用
2. 取得面试成功的因素
用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

I have read your advertisement which appeared in the newspaper and would like to take up the challenge as a sales manager with your company. I suppose this position is challenging which can give me a sense of accomplishment.At the same time, it's a good opportunity to build my own career and exercise and improve myself. My major and working experience make me qualified for this position.I am good at my major in college and have gained enough professional knowledge and skills.Besides,I used to do some jobs which was related to sales and my working ability has been recognized. At last,I am responsible and I can communicate with different people easily. I have enough patience during working,too. I would welcome an interview any time at your convenience. Looking forward to your reply.

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