2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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building a green campus is very important,because most of the students' time is in the campus. The green campus is not only for appearance,we should grow some green plants in the campus and we should keep the campus neat and clean,the meaning of green campus is also for the civilized behavior in the campus,we can't throw the rubbish in the campus everywhere,we can't speak loudly in public place .