能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;从句使用不足,建议增加长句和复杂句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
In recent years,there is a phenomenon that student neglect the study of Chinese.By study of Chinese , we can improve our intelligent and acquire right minds.However,in modern society, there are more activity appear to students.so their prefer do other interesting things to study of Chinese. There are a lot of reasons for this phenomenon.To begin with,Chinese haven't appearance than other studies so that many students don't want to study.what's more,the study of Chinese are more and more important in our education system.such as Chinese courses become less and less.In this situation,students neglect the study of Chinese.Their knowlleage about Chinese will decrease .And the traditional Chinese culture will extinct. In my opinion,the educational organization should improve the study of Chinese in school. And the student should study more Chinese .