作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
As many people say,studying Chinese plays a significant role.Because Chinese culture are the positive results of ancient wisdom.we can learn much knowledge and become more intelligent by studying Chinese.However,in modern society, In recent years,there is a phenomenon that student neglect the study of Chinese. There are a lot of reasons for this phenomenon.To begin with,Chinese haven't appearance than other studies so that many students don't want to study.what's more,the study of Chinese are more and more important in our education system.such as Chinese courses become less and less.In this situation,students neglect the study of Chinese.Their knowledge about Chinese will decrease .And the traditional Chinese culture will extinct. In my opinion,the educational organization should improve the study of Chinese in school. And the student should study more Chinese .