2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

In recent years computer become more and more popular.It seems that we cann't leave it because it is used everwhere in our life such as workplace,contact with others,watch video ,learn and so on. There are such voice about it that we should restrict the use of computer ,and spend much more time in the real world. I agree with the above point. I must say that computer change our lives and it makes many things be more convience. we can basicly use it compute numbers that we cann't acomplish by our hand. Now most of us use it work and it makes our work more efficent. But on the other hand it bring the phenominoen that we prefer to spend time with computer other than with peopher. I remember that we talked or play games during the parttime when we did not have computer.But now we are talk though the intenet even we stay at the same room. Many people can stay at home without going out for a week if they have a computer. What i want to say is that we invert the computer and we cannot be controled by it.We should make the most use of it.