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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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With the development of science and technology, we need pay attention to pollution which is more and more serious. Government plays an important part in reducing environment. Therefore, government must take lots of measures to solve the problems. Firstly, as we all known, cars create amounts of air pollution. In 2003, the government of London started to taxes congestion charges when personal cars are drove into some areas at specific time. As far as I am concerned, congestion charge not only has effect to heavy traffic, but also reduces the number of exhaust emission of cars. At the same time, government can use these taxes to develop buses and subways. In this way, the number of using personal cars will be much less further. In addition, in Tokyo, Japan launched some rules about PM2.5, especially had strict limitation to exhaust particles of diesel engine, automobile in 2003. There is no doubt that Chinese government has taken some measures to reduce pollution. For example, it is demanded that sellers shouldn’t provide free disposable plastics any longer in China. If everyone decreases to use a disposable plastic bag because of a large population in China, it will alleviate serious pollution. In deed, it limits the Chinese to use plastic bags. In the supermarket, a number of people use their own reusable shopping bags. I consider it benefits to save money and reduce the white pollution that just taking a bag when we go shopping. What is significant that China strengthens to develop renewable energies and technologies such as solar power. We all know that solar energy is so convenient, saving money and energy and reducing pollution.

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