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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17428[网页划词已开启]
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

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With rapidly development of computers newdays,those are our normal goods in our daily life.However,every coins have two sides,inclulding the computers.The problem between computers and men are increasing,the situation becoming more terrible.There are some my opinions that the situation between computers and men. On the one hand,men reply on the computers to work what difficult the things are,saving a lot of time and money.On the other hand,men start to refuse to do their own works,they wish that computers can do whatever they want.They become more stupid and lazy.At persent,computers are tools to men,but we couldn't measure that competers willn't threat the happiness of human bebings. In a short,men can't reply on computeters absolutely.

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