题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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With rapidly development of computers newdays,those are our normal goods in our daily life.However,every coins have two sides,inclulding the computers.The problem between computers and men are increasing,the situation becoming more terrible.There are some my opinions that the situation between computers and men. On the one hand,men reply on the computers to work what difficult the things are,saving a lot of time and money.On the other hand,men start to refuse to do their own works,they wish that computers can do whatever they want.They become more stupid and lazy.At persent,computers are tools to men,but we couldn't measure that competers willn't threat the happiness of human bebings. In a short,men can't reply on computeters absolutely.