题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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With rapid development of computers nowdays,those are our normal goods in our daily life.However,every coins have two sides,including the computers.The problem between computers and men is increasing,the situation becoming more terrible.There is some my opinion that the situation between computers and men. On the one hand,men reply on the computers to work what difficult the things are,saving a lot of time and money.On the other hand,men start to refuse to do their own works,they wish that computers can do whatever they want.They become more stupid and lazy.At persent,computers are tools to men,but we couldn't measure that computers willn't threaten the happiness of human bebings. In a short,men can't reply on computers absolutely.